emptiness - yawning, screaming void
swallows you
embraces you
soothes you
till it becomes your only friend
relief..and peace..forever
emptiness - rely on him
never changes, shocks, disappoints
always there, waiting, confident that you would come
dive into its black hole
oblivion..and peace..forever
emptiness - each day the same
numbing, drugging sameness
dragging, clawing, sliding, hurtling
one end, one ending
death..and peace forever
16 comments:
god! i am bad..i think i should stick to discussing world problems.
Well this is amazing.. Truly amazing.. I never understood poetry.. never indulged in it.. inside or outside.. But if I dont understand this one.. it means it is good..
hahaha..exactly what i feel about poetry. i must be losing it
its official. i am not a poet. thats the judgement of my readers. short poetic career comes to an end. i loved it though. maybe if i were to explain each line.....?
good u realised it soon.no one wants a explnation of this thanks
how can you be so cruel? only my wife loves me, nobody else
positive!!!!u r in the wrong place man! i will have to open a new blog for that one..
on its 27th reading its beginning to sound really good. try it at least 26 more times..quite modestly, i think its the greatest piece of work in the 21st century..
apu - read this poem (or whatever) to deep for just 3 times (may be u can convert this in hindi). i guarantee this time you will succeed to get rid of him. but read it out softly - it might hurt your parents too and they can get rid of you.
deep is my only hope now..bolunga saale bol achcha hai nehi to nikaal dunga..
Shala tui agey towr chakorer nam palta.
Tarpor onyo kotha.
'Peace forever'!!??
Goga goga kotha !!
Shokher pran dekho chheler...puro gorer math.
Arey raskel, oto shosta holey tow lyata chukei gechhilo.
Jonmiley moritey hobey
Moriley fer jonmitey hobey
Ebar bolo kon dikey jabey?
(ami kintu ei byaparey pakka hindu)
Negativity niey chorcha korbey abar shujog bujhey tuk korey morey shanti pawar plan bhajbey.
Umhm.... tomar tow hobeyna baba.
Emptiness (in any form)is sublime bliss man.
Think of all the things you can do to fill it up. Blessed art thou... you have the gift of time.
Look at me...........a heartfull of agendas suffering from chronic procastination courtsey acute deficiency of factor T.
No matter what I'll save & gather some.....Tomorrow I'm cooking.
at last!! someone is discussing poetry with me..a poetry written by me. if someone had told me 5 years ago that this will happen, i would have told him in some detail the exact positions i will like to try out with his mother. life is amazing man! thanks soumya my one and only true friend.
Haha...Life's like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get.
emptiness......! my exact thoughts has been put in words by you.....i think we shud meet! very soon!
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