Britney went to a party
Forgetting to wear a panty
Shutters clicked and the media screamed
But i thought she looked pretty dainty.
Dec 8, 2006
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I am from Kolkata, the land of phuchka and jhaalmoori. Love classic rock, all sorts of outdoor activities, drinking and reading. More inside...
I am from Kolkata, the land of phuchka and jhaalmoori. Love classic rock, all sorts of outdoor activities, drinking and reading. More inside...
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mail me your additions..will update the post (and hence prove to the rest of the universe that i am a better poet than you)
Opu Calcutta is simply great. I have a suggestion, leave your present Job, take writing seriously.
I mean it. You have that essential element which is necessary to be a writer.
Opu you write what you feel. There is so much you in it: emotional, wicked and humourous(at the cost of self).
Above all it is very intelligently woven. Plot is superb and the narrative tone is of Hardy's standard.
Language is a blend for all categories- common to scholar's.
Please do think about writing seriously.Calcutta is simply good.
ab aajao maidan me all u critics. i am quitting my job and becoming a full time author!! my mom will be so releaved!!
oh you naughty naughty boy!
Spear Britney.
boy am i creative or what just write the name other way round and its perfect
saale loky kya hua..u were supposed to add to the poem..futee? sala couch critic.
apu & loki got a free entry
and they were just, leching at britney
dainty though she looked
but these guys were hooked
looking where was her panty
:) galat jageh add kar diya tha shayad
loki ab tera talent bhi jhelna padega?????
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